Wednesday, November 13, 2013

Lost Shoe: Bryan


Once upon a time there was a kid name Chris and he was 12 years old his height was 5’5. He’s still in elementary school in the sixth grade. One day Chris walked home and he saw a park with a basketball court, Chris loved basketball so he went to the court and he saw other kids playing b-ball. He was watching, then a kid asked him “if he wanted to play”? he replied with a “yes”. They played for a good hour and half and when they were ready to leave Chris looked in his backpack and one of his shoes was gone. He was crying looking for his shoe because he barley got those a week ago, he thought that his mom was going to be mad at him. A kid name Bryan went to the park and played ball at 10pm, it was pretty late and he shot and ran at the hoop and tripped over a shoe, it was blue and white so he left it there and went home . 

2 comments:

  1. I liked how they were playing basketball. you should put in more detail? did he ever get his shoe back. -Gabe

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  2. good job on your detail it makes us picture your character.

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